I went back and did a thorough spell and punctuation check, and fixed some run on sentences, also paragraphs were too long. One person pointed out that I was being unrealistic on how long I was having my character hit a golf ball, the story was a fantasy but hey he was right about it being unrealistic, and he had brought it up politely so no reason not to make a change. After making those corrections I reposted the story awaiting further comments and hoping for a few compliments.There were some attaboys and requests to keep writing, but another reader pointed out that my story would go better if it was a girl protagonist rather than a male, so Robert became Roberta and I reposted.This was followed by a deluge of emails. I had forgotten to do a search and replace for; he, him, and his. I said a few choice words but made the corrections and reposted.Again a few good comments but one really good thought. Golf though played by women is more of a man's game; I should have her play tennis. "And Hannah was the teenager who skimmed pot from you?" Detective Ames asked."I see someone briefed you. Yes she was, but it wasn't anything like this," I explained."No but she could have told someone else how to beat the alarms," Ames said."She could have since all they did was somehow avoid the pressure sensors in the road. Steve and I think they used our electric tractor to haul one bundle of plants to the gate and then hand them around it," I said."You base this on what," Ames asked."The CCTV footage," I replied. "Would you mind getting on with doing what you have to do. We would like to get some sleep so that we can get back to work tomorrow." Well let's see that CCTV footage," Ames said.I ran it for her and then turned it off when I got to the long blank space until we arrived. I stopped it but Ames demanded I show her the rest of it. There was the spot where we walked around with shotgun and kicked things. Then there was a glare for just a few minutes before the cop car showed.
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