I also should have arranged for it to happen sooner, so it’s not all resolved in a single chapter. One of the improvements that Rebellion had was multiple POVs and stories. However, as I learned, it was hard to move the plot forward enough when cramming three stories into one chapter. The way I did the last few chapters is how I am going to try and write from now on, an entire chapter revolving on one character. That being said, I’m going to scale back Elfish Descent to just two POVs, and they are going to follow one main storyline, while each will have its own side stories and plots. Along a similar line, the pacing was way off in the beginning of the story. Susannah’s chapters went too slow, and Cindy’s chapters went too fast. I should have better balanced out the Rebellion POVs. Unfortunately, I was posting a chapter every time I finished a chapter, which made it quite difficult to go back and fix things like that. Which is why, in the future, I am going to write several. ’ mumbled the frat guy. Amy was furious at her neighbor. No wonder Suzanne freaked at the slightest hint of plagiarism. Why was she a ‘stupid bitch’ just because she didn’t want someone else copying her test? As Lisa slowly walked up the side of the room on the lookout for cheaters, Amy’s neighbor twisted to the other side look at his other neighbor’s paper. The other guy was just as irritated as was Amy, and a bit more vocal. ‘Look, shithead, do your own fucking work.’ Lisa quickly looked over to the three students. She had heard the other guy’s comment. Amy’s eyes met the TA’s, then moved in the direction of her cheating neighbor, then back to Lisa’s face. The TA nodded slightly. YES!! Looks like Burnside has herself a host for her party, thought Amy to herself. Two days later Burnside returned the tests. Amy was sitting next to the same fraternity guy. Lisa handed him an empty manila folder. Amy smiled wickedly. The guy gave her a sharp look. ‘What’s so funny?’ he snapped. ‘You’ll.
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